For each student essay submitted, I will provide specific visual feedback to help the student learn how they can improve their essay writing. I even include pictures to help the students, especially the visual learners, key in on their prime focus points. See the sample below.
I return all the feedback in CD form, and it will also include videos that represent the ideas the student wrote about in their essay.
These are great for reviewing as a group with your class. The results will be noticed immediately in their next assignments.
Contact me if you are interested in trying out this service with a few of your students' essays.
